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Carol’s Homework Assignment Post WIFYR 2

 Cinder: Book 1 of the Lunar Chronicles by Marissa Meyer419rjQNqYhL

First chapter is 16 pages.

The first line: “The screw through Cinder’s ankle had rusted, …” Quite the attention getter. There’s enough information given between the back cover blurb, the inside flap blurb, and the cover itself for us to know that she’s a cyborg. We don’t know how much, but we can safely assume it’s at least the foot.

The first page focuses on her removing her foot. She struggles getting the rusted screw out, then fighting with the other hardware and, finally, just letting her foot dangle from her leg by its wires. We discover not only her foot but one hand as well is artificial.

Second page begins a detailed point of scene. She has a stall filled with used android and other odds and ends electronic and mechanical in nature. We also get a picture of the stall’s position with relation to other stalls in the crowded market square in New Beijing.

Third page, also finishes with her removing the foot completely.

Because of children playing Ring Around the Rosy, a recently revived game originating during ancient plague times, there’s a hint of a plague or some other widespread health issue.

We are introduced to Sacha the baker and her disdain for Cinder because of her differences from “real” humans. There’s inner dialogue from Cinder indicating a few of the vendors in her area are aware of her differences and are somewhat uncomfortable with it.

Prince Kaito arrives with a broken android. (No, not his tablet, but a walking, talking android, or it was before it broke.) Cinder recognizes the Crown Prince, and the handsomest man in all of New Beijing. We deal with her stammering and fan craziness for a page or so.

For the next five pages we are filled with all kinds of things that might be wrong with the android: it’s old, the problem isn’t readily apparent, how was it acting before it stopped completely, etc., etc., etc. Along with the troubleshooting Q&A, we get a glimpse of character development and some insight into Cinder’s abilities. Possible spoiler: There’s more to her cyborg-ness than just her foot.

Cinder’s android assistant shows up with Cinder’s replacement foot. Cinder makes excuses claiming it’s for another client. Her assistant, though android, is smitten with the prince as well.

When all the arrangements are made for Cinder to work on the android and get it ready for the prince to pick up in a few days, the prince departs.

Shortly after his departure a scream is heard across the way. Sacha the baker has the plague… End chapter.

Okay, four characters in eleven pages. There were other people milling about, a group of kids, but nobody with any real presence, they’re there for point of scene. Sacha is removed from the equation fairly fast, so, basically, we have three characters who, from all appearances, will be central to the story.

There was a lot of useful information and character development in the first chapter. Some of it was a little drawn out, but informative nevertheless. Some things I can definitely take and use.

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Thursday’s 13—Stratford’s Saucy Sonneteer

As easy as A, B, C . . . from HA

The old saying of “He’s so eloquent, he can tell someone to go to Hell and make them look forward to the trip” has always been the Benschmark of a silver-tongued devil. The leader of silver-tongued devils, William Shakespeare, was a master at the art of insults.

The list below was borrowed (and edited) from Buzzfeed. I’ve left off some to achieve the necessary 13 for today’s blog. I’ve also left out the cats. In the original article, every insult has an appropriate feline. Click on this link to see the entire article.

  1. Thou cream-faced loon—Macbeth
  2. Thou art as loathsome as a toad—Titus Andronicus
  3. I do desire we be better strangers—As You Like It
  4. You scullion. You rampalian. You fustilarian. I’ll tickle your catastrophe.—Henry IV Part Two
  5. There’s no more faith in thee than in a stewed prune.—Henry IV, Part One
  6. Thou art a boil, a plague sore, an embossed carbuncle in my corrupted blood.—King Lear
  7. Thou art a natural coward without instinct.—Henry IV, Part One
  8. You, minion, are too saucy.—The Two Gentlemen of Verona
  9. Thou art the best of the cut-throats.—Macbeth
  10. A weasel hath not the deal of spleen as thou are toss’d with.—Henry IV, Part One
  11. Your virginity breeds mites, much like a cheese.—All’s Well that Ends Well
  12. Thou leather-jerkin, crystal-button, knot-pated, agatering, puke-stocking, caddis garter, smooth-tongue, Spanish pouch.—Henry IV, Part One
  13. Thou art the son and heir of a mongrel bitch.—King Lear

I have learned much sitting at the feet of the Master.

See you day-after-tomorrow for Saturday Softcover.

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